Richie

Descended From Darkness · Nov 01, 2007, 01:16 PM

There was a kid in Plano
who had something horrible
but he kept on keeping on (going on; living on)

He had the most spirit
more than anyone else
I knew anyone had
or even if that was
humanly possible

He was sickly of course
but it didn't stop him
it probably never would

But now fo course that's
a different story
since he's long gone

But know this: he is
truly alive in our hearts
and is the most spirited
kid anyone will ever know
and a true Wildcat.

-------------------------
I wrote this in memoriam of a kid I knew who passed on Tuesday night in the ER. He had cysticphybrosis(sp?). He was truly spirited and put his whole heart in Plano and his classes. He will be missed by everyone.

*Lasura* · Nov 01, 2007, 01:25 PM

@.@ that's so sad.... But it's great that you've written this poem... I'm sure he appriciates it... And it's a really nice poem too... A nice work you've done here, really sweet of you to do it. I hope you don't have to write anything like that for a long, long time now... forever maybe? ^^

Tifa Lockhart · Nov 01, 2007, 05:30 PM

Mm, that is quite a sad poem. It was well written and I like it. I hope you see more poems from you. ^_^

*RayMe* · Nov 02, 2007, 07:11 AM

eeek.. @.@ sheesh... sad indeed..

Hmmm well theres always bound to be a death Lasura...sooner or later someone we know going to go away~ and a poem could show that we do take that person as a friend... and what we though of him..

Nicely done and thats so kind of you to make such poem... ^^

Nov 01, 2007, 01:16 PM	#1 (permalink)
Descended From Darkness Jigoku Shoujo Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: somewhere far far away from here. Posts: 505 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 9,771	Richie There was a kid in Plano who had something horrible but he kept on keeping on (going on; living on) He had the most spirit more than anyone else I knew anyone had or even if that was humanly possible He was sickly of course but it didn't stop him it probably never would But now fo course that's a different story since he's long gone But know this: he is truly alive in our hearts and is the most spirited kid anyone will ever know and a true Wildcat. ------------------------- I wrote this in memoriam of a kid I knew who passed on Tuesday night in the ER. He had cysticphybrosis(sp?). He was truly spirited and put his whole heart in Plano and his classes. He will be missed by everyone. __________________ Thanx zyta for the awesome set [ Rai's Gallery: Rai's myspace : Rai's Deviantart: Angelic Ruin:SpiritDetective
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Nov 01, 2007, 01:25 PM	#2 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,866 Thanks: 56 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 49,132	Re: Richie @.@ that's so sad.... But it's great that you've written this poem... I'm sure he appriciates it... And it's a really nice poem too... A nice work you've done here, really sweet of you to do it. I hope you don't have to write anything like that for a long, long time now... forever maybe? ^^ __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Nov 01, 2007, 05:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
Tifa Lockhart Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Nibelheim Posts: 150 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,677	Re: Richie Mm, that is quite a sad poem. It was well written and I like it. I hope you see more poems from you. ^_^
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Nov 02, 2007, 07:11 AM	#4 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,589 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 58,560	Re: Richie eeek.. @.@ sheesh... sad indeed.. Hmmm well theres always bound to be a death Lasura...sooner or later someone we know going to go away~ and a poem could show that we do take that person as a friend... and what we though of him.. Nicely done and thats so kind of you to make such poem... ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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