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    ~Rin~

    Rin my friend
    I miss you dearly.
    I miss you stories
    Your cheerful attitude.

    It's been along time
    since I last heard from you
    The last I read your story
    The last any of us had
    heard from you.

    Now you are gone
    And there's nothing
    Any of us can do

    I miss you dearly.
    I feel sad
    that you're not here.

    I feel that
    I can't keep up to my promise.
    Everytime I look at your story.
    I cry
    as it reminds me of you.

    I'm sorry
    old friend.
    But I feel that I
    failed you.

    Please forgive me.

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    Re: ~Rin~

    I don't know who Rin is but kool poem. Its awesome! I'm sure they'll forgive you I guess? well keep it up!
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    Re: ~Rin~

    Grammar and spelling should be worked on for this poem.
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