wow, it creates image in my mind. It's so..im speechless that's all i could say. lol it's good!
never prevails back to life
and it gets you lost in time
you cant inhale anymore
the love and care
that evryone hold
you lose sight
you get eternal fights
and theres no one to saver ur life
people cant just understand
that a riped heart never stands
to get another chance
just like a big hole of quicksand
it can't go on, it cant feel
just like a cursed seal
a barrier is around you
you cant see the things that around you
they give you a push and fix it with glue
for never have a heart so blue
perdoname michelle!
wow, it creates image in my mind. It's so..im speechless that's all i could say. lol it's good!
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
Awesome poem! The imagery is great and you can feel the bitterness and hurt in your heart as your writing this one! Very well put together to get your point across! Awesome job!
thanx for ur opinions glad u like it
perdoname michelle!
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