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    ''Riped Heart''

    never prevails back to life
    and it gets you lost in time
    you cant inhale anymore
    the love and care
    that evryone hold
    you lose sight
    you get eternal fights
    and theres no one to saver ur life

    people cant just understand
    that a riped heart never stands
    to get another chance
    just like a big hole of quicksand
    it can't go on, it cant feel
    just like a cursed seal
    a barrier is around you
    you cant see the things that around you
    they give you a push and fix it with glue
    for never have a heart so blue



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: ''Riped Heart''

    wow, it creates image in my mind. It's so..im speechless that's all i could say. lol it's good!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: ''Riped Heart''

    Awesome poem! The imagery is great and you can feel the bitterness and hurt in your heart as your writing this one! Very well put together to get your point across! Awesome job!

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    Re: ''Riped Heart''

    thanx for ur opinions glad u like it



    perdoname michelle!

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