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![]() ![]() Credits: 309 | ''Riped Heart'' never prevails back to life and it gets you lost in time you cant inhale anymore the love and care that evryone hold you lose sight you get eternal fights and theres no one to saver ur life people cant just understand that a riped heart never stands to get another chance just like a big hole of quicksand it can't go on, it cant feel just like a cursed seal a barrier is around you you cant see the things that around you they give you a push and fix it with glue for never have a heart so blue
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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world
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![]() ![]() Credits: 410 | Re: ''Riped Heart'' wow, it creates image in my mind. It's so..im speechless that's all i could say. lol it's good!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,176 | Re: ''Riped Heart'' Awesome poem! The imagery is great and you can feel the bitterness and hurt in your heart as your writing this one! Very well put together to get your point across! Awesome job!
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