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Old Sep 15, 2006, 06:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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''Riped Heart''

never prevails back to life
and it gets you lost in time
you cant inhale anymore
the love and care
that evryone hold
you lose sight
you get eternal fights
and theres no one to saver ur life

people cant just understand
that a riped heart never stands
to get another chance
just like a big hole of quicksand
it can't go on, it cant feel
just like a cursed seal
a barrier is around you
you cant see the things that around you
they give you a push and fix it with glue
for never have a heart so blue
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Old Sep 15, 2006, 11:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: ''Riped Heart''

wow, it creates image in my mind. It's so..im speechless that's all i could say. lol it's good!
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Re: ''Riped Heart''

Awesome poem! The imagery is great and you can feel the bitterness and hurt in your heart as your writing this one! Very well put together to get your point across! Awesome job!
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Old Sep 17, 2006, 07:36 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanx for ur opinions glad u like it
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