Ripples of Time

shadowrulz · Dec 30, 2007, 02:21 PM

Smoothing out the ripples of time
Requires unraveling the ripples of time
Even just touching it is sublime
Just to touch the ripples of time.

Watching the ripples of time
Requires waiting for the ripples of time
Noting is as such a mime
Just nothing quite like the ripples of time

Wanting the ripples of time
Requires knowing the ripples of time
Sweetness of a perfectly ripe lime
Just is perfect are the ripples of time

Learning of the ripples of time
Requires imagining the ripples of time
The flash of knowledge shinier than a dime
Just is the power of the ripples of time

!Akura13 · Dec 30, 2007, 11:44 PM

wow, this was such a...complicated but very nice poem~! Though I had to like read it twice, I really like how you wrote it and it's a very wonderful poem shadow~! I really hope to see more from you~!^^

!The GunGrave of Trigun · Dec 31, 2007, 11:05 AM

It repeated so much that i did not like it i was like boring not to be mean but kepp writing k.

Dec 30, 2007, 02:21 PM	#1 (permalink)
shadowrulz Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 371 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 6,570	Ripples of Time Smoothing out the ripples of time Requires unraveling the ripples of time Even just touching it is sublime Just to touch the ripples of time. Watching the ripples of time Requires waiting for the ripples of time Noting is as such a mime Just nothing quite like the ripples of time Wanting the ripples of time Requires knowing the ripples of time Sweetness of a perfectly ripe lime Just is perfect are the ripples of time Learning of the ripples of time Requires imagining the ripples of time The flash of knowledge shinier than a dime Just is the power of the ripples of time __________________ CLICK GOODBYE A.O.
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Dec 30, 2007, 11:44 PM	#2 (permalink)
!Akura13 Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan... Posts: 638 Thanks: 9 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 12,099	Re: Ripples of Time wow, this was such a...complicated but very nice poem~! Though I had to like read it twice, I really like how you wrote it and it's a very wonderful poem shadow~! I really hope to see more from you~!^^
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!The GunGrave of Trigun Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Hell Posts: 1,099 Thanks: 4 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 21,401	Re: Ripples of Time It repeated so much that i did not like it i was like boring not to be mean but kepp writing k.
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