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    Ripples of Time

    Smoothing out the ripples of time
    Requires unraveling the ripples of time
    Even just touching it is sublime
    Just to touch the ripples of time.

    Watching the ripples of time
    Requires waiting for the ripples of time
    Noting is as such a mime
    Just nothing quite like the ripples of time

    Wanting the ripples of time
    Requires knowing the ripples of time
    Sweetness of a perfectly ripe lime
    Just is perfect are the ripples of time

    Learning of the ripples of time
    Requires imagining the ripples of time
    The flash of knowledge shinier than a dime
    Just is the power of the ripples of time

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    Re: Ripples of Time

    wow, this was such a...complicated but very nice poem~! Though I had to like read it twice, I really like how you wrote it and it's a very wonderful poem shadow~! I really hope to see more from you~!^^



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    Re: Ripples of Time

    It repeated so much that i did not like it i was like boring not to be mean but kepp writing k.

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