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Old Dec 30, 2007, 02:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Ripples of Time

Smoothing out the ripples of time
Requires unraveling the ripples of time
Even just touching it is sublime
Just to touch the ripples of time.

Watching the ripples of time
Requires waiting for the ripples of time
Noting is as such a mime
Just nothing quite like the ripples of time

Wanting the ripples of time
Requires knowing the ripples of time
Sweetness of a perfectly ripe lime
Just is perfect are the ripples of time

Learning of the ripples of time
Requires imagining the ripples of time
The flash of knowledge shinier than a dime
Just is the power of the ripples of time
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Old Dec 30, 2007, 11:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Ripples of Time

wow, this was such a...complicated but very nice poem~! Though I had to like read it twice, I really like how you wrote it and it's a very wonderful poem shadow~! I really hope to see more from you~!^^
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It repeated so much that i did not like it i was like boring not to be mean but kepp writing k.
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