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    Rise Above it.

    Attacks come at me from out the nowhere.
    Drama whores, they love to go there.
    Im just trying to wash my hair.
    Of all you people unaware.
    That I will rise above it.

    Of both of you... I wash my hands.
    Dont think for one second I'll foil your plans.
    Im not involved. Im not prying.
    Yep, you deserve it... and Im not lying.
    And though, inside, I'm slowly dying.
    I will rise above it.

    Truely, I did feel I found "the one".
    I'm homicide. And hes the gun.
    Before I let the pain get bigger.
    I wont hesitate to pull the trigger.
    But I'd only kill these past 4 years.
    ALL my f*cking wasted tears.
    You, him, even my own kid.
    Just to un-do the damage that was did.

    Then my baby wouldn't stare at the door and cry.
    And my heart wouldn't have to die.
    Your f*cking ego wouldn't be so inflated.
    No "Im so famous! Im so hated!"
    Too late now, my life is distorted.
    So do what you do... I support it.
    I've picked up the pieces. Cleaned up the mess.
    Theres a hole in my puzzle, but I could care less
    Because one piece wont make a picture without me.
    It may fit in somewhere else, but dont you doubt me.
    I WILL RISE ABOVE IT.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Rise Above it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Attacks come at me from out the nowhere.
    Drama whores, they love to go there.
    Im just trying to wash my hair.
    Of all you people unaware.
    That I will rise above it.

    Of both of you... I wash my hands.
    Dont think for one second I'll foil your plans.
    Im not involved. Im not prying.
    Yep, you deserve it... and Im not lying.
    And though, inside, I'm slowly dying.
    I will rise above it.

    Truely, I did feel I found "the one".
    I'm homicide. And hes the gun.
    Before I let the pain get bigger.
    I wont hesitate to pull the trigger.
    But I'd only kill these past 4 years.
    ALL my f*cking wasted tears.
    You, him, even my own kid.
    Just to un-do the damage that was did.

    Then my baby wouldn't stare at the door and cry.
    And my heart wouldn't have to die.
    Your f*cking ego wouldn't be so inflated.
    No "Im so famous! Im so hated!"
    Too late now, my life is distorted.
    So do what you do... I support it.
    I've picked up the pieces. Cleaned up the mess.
    Theres a hole in my puzzle, but I could care less
    Because one piece wont make a picture without me.
    It may fit in somewhere else, but dont you doubt me.
    I WILL RISE ABOVE IT.
    Even tho I know that I'm the reason you felt compelled to express this and If eel like the horrible person you make me out to be today. I really like this poem. it's longer then most of yours. It's beautifully written and I'm particularlly fond of a few lines in it. "I've picked up the pieces. Cleaned up the mess.
    Theres a hole in my puzzle, but I could care less
    Because one piece wont make a picture without me." is one of them... I like that a lot. I wish I could be okay with the empty feeling I've got.
    "Truely, I did feel I found "the one".
    I'm homicide. And hes the gun.
    Before I let the pain get bigger.
    I wont hesitate to pull the trigger." And these, just because they're beautiful.. Bery well put.. Suppose I should put my box of "Psych-Ohs" in the cubbard eh?

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    Re: Rise Above it.

    very awesome poem and rising above
    those who would try and nring you down
    is the best thing you could possably do.

    i have seen hearts bust into a million
    unsolvable peices and they let the other
    *people* to say in a nice way run them
    down to where there is nothing but tears
    left.

    this poem proves that there is always
    a way to rise above it and though your not
    a complete puzzle dosnt mean that your perfect
    piece isnt out there , trust me on that because i have
    seen sadness come from hope so dont give up.

    this poem was an awesome read
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Rise Above it.

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    "I've picked up the pieces. Cleaned up the mess.
    Theres a hole in my puzzle, but I could care less
    Because one piece wont make a picture without me." is one of them... I like that a lot. I wish I could be okay with the empty feeling I've got.


    Yes, Im fine with the empty feeling inside.

    Damn, you must not know a show when its being put on for you. I mean really what kind of poetry battle would this be if I said "You have the only thing Ive ever wanted and Im miserable without it"....
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Rise Above it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Yes, Im fine with the empty feeling inside.

    Damn, you must not know a show when its being put on for you. I mean really what kind of poetry battle would this be if I said "You have the only thing Ive ever wanted and Im miserable without it"....
    Yanno. I hate liquor and I feel like drinking an awful lot lately. I just wanna get good and tossed... Ahem anyways. Valid point. But it's still a great poem.

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