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    Rise from the ashes

    I rise from the ashes of defeat
    Not know if I would make it
    covered in ashes from the the burning flames from my head down to my feet
    I was forced to take a breath and sit

    Not knowing if I still have to go out and still having fear
    I look for my family and friends
    but there no were near
    I knew my life ends
    right know and here
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    Re: Rise from the ashes

    that poem kinda sounds like a Phoenix,
    cool,
    Nice jod.

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