Rise from the ashes

lone w · Mar 11, 2007, 07:03 AM

I rise from the ashes of defeat
Not know if I would make it
covered in ashes from the the burning flames from my head down to my feet
I was forced to take a breath and sit

Not knowing if I still have to go out and still having fear
I look for my family and friends
but there no were near
I knew my life ends
right know and here

!flaminghate · Mar 11, 2007, 08:27 AM

that poem kinda sounds like a Phoenix,
cool,
Nice jod.

Mar 11, 2007, 07:03 AM	#1 (permalink)
lone w Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: MAssachuessets Posts: 27 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Rise from the ashes I rise from the ashes of defeat Not know if I would make it covered in ashes from the the burning flames from my head down to my feet I was forced to take a breath and sit Not knowing if I still have to go out and still having fear I look for my family and friends but there no were near I knew my life ends right know and here __________________ Lone W Last edited by lone w; Mar 11, 2007 at 09:02 AM.
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Mar 11, 2007, 08:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Re: Rise from the ashes that poem kinda sounds like a Phoenix, cool, Nice jod.
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