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    A River of Silent Tears

    I cry but no one hears.
    I sit in room full of poeple yet I am alone.
    I ask for help, But no one cares.
    When I am alone, a single tear falls from my eyes,
    this is what I call a silent cry.
    I look back upon my years,
    Inside I cry a river of silent tears.
    No one hears my cry because no one wants to listin.
    As a tear flows from my eye through the sunlight it glistens.
    Just like the rain my tears keep falling and this is my worst fear.
    As I swim through this River of Silent Tears.

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    Re: A River of Silent Tears

    Good poem it was very interesting. I look forward to reading more.
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    Re: A River of Silent Tears

    I think I've read this before...

    Anyways, keeping the subject trhoughout the short is poem is nice.
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    Re: A River of Silent Tears

    I love this it sounds like me in a way. very good.
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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