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Feb 19, 2007, 10:36 AM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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 Credits: 59,502 | The road... The Road __________________________________ As i was looking to the horizon... I realized, everything looks so tiny and far. I let out a sigh and smiled. Withouth knowing whats infront, i starts to walk along the road... the endless road to the horizon, this is a journey...a journey i must make. During this journey of mine... i shall encounter many people, besides that...i will find obstacles, even knowing of that...i marchs on. I might walk on a green grassy road.. or, on a road entangled with thorns... or even on a rocky path,climb mountains, cross rivers,through mists,all on this road... the road that i choose... This must be done~! No matter what it takes... No matter how long it takes... All this... The reason i have been doing this... The cause that make me walk... The factor that pushes me on... All this... Is to find me a santuary... My sanctuary... Eventhough i wont stop for a long time, eventhough this sanctuary is only for temporary. I will walk on~! I will continue this journey~! To the horizons... Towards MY sanctuary~! So i could i end my search... before the road ends... Just like what you are doing... Like what they did... The people who found the reason to live... and their happiness...their sanctuary... the end...  |
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Feb 19, 2007, 11:44 AM
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Credits: 362 | Re: The road... well written! i like it all. so true to the way of life, the path and road that we must follow to see where it will take us. keep it up my freind!
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Feb 19, 2007, 11:50 AM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: The road... Lol sure do my friend..it is where the path has taken me so far..i will keep it up  |
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Feb 19, 2007, 12:19 PM
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Credits: 362 | Re: The road... good never lose that spark! i enjoy it and your poems!
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Feb 19, 2007, 12:22 PM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: The road... Thx...the road has shown me ur poems too..keep it up man they are nice ^^ and i shall do mine |
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Feb 19, 2007, 12:38 PM
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Credits: 362 | Re: The road... well i shall continue on my path weither it be alone or with a crowd. i shall not sway in my ways, i keep true to who i am. and of course ill be around to see more of yours!
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Feb 19, 2007, 12:41 PM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: The road... waw nice words... those words of yours conviced me and i trust u dear friend..our path has crossed with each other it seems let us go forth...~! and make more poems~!  |
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Feb 19, 2007, 12:45 PM
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Credits: 362 | Re: The road... sure i look forward to it! im a man of few words until you get me going! then it never stops!
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Feb 19, 2007, 10:41 PM
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| Why so serious? | Re: The road... o.< grammar and spelling!!! sorry ray-chan..I'm very anal when it comes to that type of stuff.. Overall excellent poem!! Speaks of enlightment...Very much like Wolf's Rain's 'Paradise'. Nice poem Ray! Continue writing your poems! They're great! :] |
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Feb 20, 2007, 04:55 AM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: The road... Thx..where's them mistakes..can u point them out pls? i wanna know what mistakes i have done.. |
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Feb 20, 2007, 06:18 AM
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Credits: 1,286 | Re: The road... Nice poem, the only suggestions I have would be to change marchs to march. Change Withouth to without, and change mists to mist and separate eventhough. Other than a couple spelling mistakes nice job on the poem! 
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