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    The Road Of Life!

    As i walk down this beaten
    path th years show how
    i never cared,as i wonder
    on the road of life i think
    nothing is ever the same.

    The time has past foe tears
    and fear's ,as i know now
    that life is just a phase nothing
    to do but see the haze ,as i
    look so far away.

    People come and people go
    the more they change the
    more they stay the same,
    nothing really suprises me
    when life just turn's a curb.

    The love,the hatred,the sadness,
    the tear's ,the horror iif it all inside
    of me ,as i know everytthing is just
    gonna keep changing on this road
    i am on.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Road Of Life!

    That was a great poem. It brings up some truths about how some people feel about life. Nice job and I look forward to reading more.

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    Re: The Road Of Life!

    I liked that one a lot, like I do all your poems and that one speaks the truth very much. Can't wait to read more!
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    Re: The Road Of Life!

    Capitalization throughout the entire poem wouldve been nice. Oh, and correct punctuation wouldve helped the flow.
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    Re: The Road Of Life!

    Very laid out, besides the letter and punction like Kasai saqid but really cool i like
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