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Reply With QuoteThat was a great poem. It brings up some truths about how some people feel about life. Nice job and I look forward to reading more.
As i walk down this beaten
path th years show how
i never cared,as i wonder
on the road of life i think
nothing is ever the same.
The time has past foe tears
and fear's ,as i know now
that life is just a phase nothing
to do but see the haze ,as i
look so far away.
People come and people go
the more they change the
more they stay the same,
nothing really suprises me
when life just turn's a curb.
The love,the hatred,the sadness,
the tear's ,the horror iif it all inside
of me ,as i know everytthing is just
gonna keep changing on this road
i am on.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
That was a great poem. It brings up some truths about how some people feel about life. Nice job and I look forward to reading more.
I liked that one a lot, like I do all your poemsand that one speaks the truth very much. Can't wait to read more!
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
Capitalization throughout the entire poem wouldve been nice. Oh, and correct punctuation wouldve helped the flow.
Seduced by Flesh
Very laid out, besides the letter and punction like Kasai saqid but really cool i like
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