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Jun 09, 2006, 01:57 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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 Credits: 5,581 | Romio and Juliet revised! before i begine i would like to state that this poem is from william shakespear i revised it some and add'ed my own words as a tribute to him.this was his writting's way beofre i thought about this. so i am only doing a revised version. so it will be shorter than his. What love hath came from yonder heart wich no one can receive but a heart that has welcomed it such as my heart has done for you. Your hair smelling of sweet jasmine that sways in the in the wind, face that is soft to the touch and is flawless in comparason to the most beautfull art in the world,a smile that could tame a beast and mealt the coldest of heart's. Oh juliet my love how i long to be with you on this day in question to hold you in my arm'sand enjoy the eternal bliss of never ending love and the caress ofof your hand as you stroke my face with such loving attentioni sigh inside as i think of you and need you touch to satisfy my passion and lust for you if only for a moment i would treasure it for a life time. The wind now whisper's your name as i aproach your humble abode to try and win your favour and your heart there have been to many night's alone for me to just walk away now i will go through hell and the rising moon above how i love you juliet to embrace you as we runaway through the night from our family plight's and quarrel's and to live together in love and peace with no coruption or hatred of ken or partake in any feudes that would break a heart as pure as yours. I now aproach your balcony and wait for your sweet voice to beckon me so i stop this these thought's of you and me and prepare for a happy future with you. death itself can never separate us i hear your voice now as i aproach my heart is happy we will live forever . i did this as a tribute to Shakespear and for love everywhere i hope what i wrote would be apoved by shakespear if he was living. anyway all comment's and critics welcome and i hope i did better this time than the last one.
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Jun 09, 2006, 02:11 AM
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Credits: 2,616 | Re: Romio and Juliet revised! That is so sweet.I loved it. You really did an awesome job with it. |
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Jun 09, 2006, 01:45 PM
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Credits: 5,581 | Re: Romio and Juliet revised! there is no such thing as to much sugar
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Jun 09, 2006, 02:23 PM
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 ^So nostalgic  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A very pink realm?....
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Credits: 12,030 | Re: Romio and Juliet revised! colorful use of words, and good usage of old english., /. orverall its shakespear material, its fun to use those words like that. lol, good work.^_^
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Jun 09, 2006, 02:28 PM
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Credits: 5,581 | Re: Romio and Juliet revised! thank you and yea it is because guys really knew how to be romantic back then. but i think some guy's are still like that today but its rare
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