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    The Rose!



    This rose is for you my love
    and for what you represent
    the Stem long like your,black
    flowing hair on a full moon lit
    night with a light breeze

    The thorns how you cut me
    so easily be it with love or
    with hate everything from you
    cuts me so deeply and with so much
    ruthless intent that your touch and
    thought's cut me.

    The pedals as soft and as fragile
    as your flesh as i let you pierce
    my heart for loves true test and like
    the pedal our love could wither at
    any moment.

    The blood its drips so freely
    like your words do ,its almost
    like a dream when you ,speak
    and knowing i will soon give you
    what you crave so much .

    The puddle it fills with such
    redness that i compare it your,
    life of dispair and tragady that
    is spread out through your life
    no remorse do i have for these
    words.


    ok this ine is sort new for me i tried
    using a pic and using it every part of
    it in the poem i dont know if i did it right
    but any comments or tip would be helpfull
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Aug 21, 2006 at 05:36 PM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Rose!

    .........WOW!! That was really awesome Big Bro! And I mean it.I just love how you had a Rose represents Love and all.Awesome job
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: The Rose!

    Good job babe.I liked it.you keep up the good work.

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    Re: The Rose!

    im glad you liked it though i still need some work with
    discrition's i think or comparing people to things like
    this rose
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Rose!

    Cool!!! I Like It!!!!!!!!!!
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    Re: The Rose!

    Wow, I love it when you describe the picture with your poem and adding details to it. Keep it up!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: The Rose!

    i loved it ^^ and the pic you added goes with the poem you wrote
    keep it up




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    Re: The Rose!

    i really liked the way you compare things
    like blood pouring compared to words flowing
    fragile petals to soft flesh
    good job there
    i also like the illustration, gives it more of a real feel, lets the audience connect more.
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