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Aug 20, 2006, 11:05 PM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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 Credits: 3,212 | The Rose!  This rose is for you my love and for what you represent the Stem long like your,black flowing hair on a full moon lit night with a light breeze The thorns how you cut me so easily be it with love or with hate everything from you cuts me so deeply and with so much ruthless intent that your touch and thought's cut me. The pedals as soft and as fragile as your flesh as i let you pierce my heart for loves true test and like the pedal our love could wither at any moment. The blood its drips so freely like your words do ,its almost like a dream when you ,speak and knowing i will soon give you what you crave so much . The puddle it fills with such redness that i compare it your, life of dispair and tragady that is spread out through your life no remorse do i have for these words. ok this ine is sort new for me i tried using a pic and using it every part of it in the poem i dont know if i did it right but any comments or tip would be helpfull Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Aug 21, 2006 at 05:36 PM. |
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Aug 20, 2006, 11:16 PM
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Credits: 3,351 | Re: The Rose! .........WOW!! That was really awesome Big Bro! And I mean it.I just love how you had a Rose represents Love and all.Awesome job 
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Aug 21, 2006, 12:31 PM
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: The Rose! im glad you liked it though i still need some work with discrition's i think or comparing people to things like this rose |
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Aug 21, 2006, 03:45 PM
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Credits: 410 | Re: The Rose! Wow, I love it when you describe the picture with your poem and adding details to it. Keep it up!
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Aug 21, 2006, 05:20 PM
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| is backkk  | Re: The Rose! i really liked the way you compare things like blood pouring compared to words flowing fragile petals to soft flesh good job there i also like the illustration, gives it more of a real feel, lets the audience connect more.
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Aug 21, 2006, 05:32 PM
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: The Rose! thanks thats what i was going for im glad you all liked it . im going to try others like this soon but i was just seeing if i did well with this one |
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Aug 21, 2006, 05:35 PM
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Credits: 1,497 | Re: The Rose! Great poem, i must say ^^ filled with emotions. Also, i liked your comparison with the person and the rose.
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Aug 21, 2006, 05:55 PM
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: The Rose! thanks like i said before im gonna try and do more like this when i can |
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