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  1. Oct 07, 2007 11:36 PM #1
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    Rose

    Loves only symbol
    our passion caught
    no red as full
    in flowers bought.

    Quiet beatings in heart
    Soft whisper's thought
    Slow to part
    left empty and dead

    A beatiful flower
    and violent thorn
    in this hour
    brings my scorn.

    Our dying duty
    and love is lost
    burning beauty
    turns winters frost.

    Quietly
    Softly
    Slowly
    ... dead

    ... and join my rebellion against time.
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  2. Oct 08, 2007 08:13 AM #2
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    Re: Rose

    @.@ woa... nice... this is very good... brilliant i must say... keep up the good work...

    the ending was shocking... @.@
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    Re: Rose

    Wow... I'm kinda speechless.

    That is beautiful, extremely moving. You have real talent.

    I don't know who the girl... sorry, woman is that is your muse, but she certainly inspirer's you. It is truly a beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing with us.
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    Re: Rose

    This is lovely.. I like the way you refer it to a rose. ^-^
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  5. Oct 19, 2007 05:52 PM #5
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    Re: Rose

    Wow O.O That is awsome!!
    I love it and the like one word likes and
    the color just adds so much more to it.
    Keep up the good work and hope to see more.^.^

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