If a teardrop could make a rose,
and only a pure rose...
then even still...
would the rose not be as pure as you.
in it's entirety...
the rose could never be,
as beautiful as the lady,
for which I'd give it to.........
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If a teardrop could make a rose,
and only a pure rose...
then even still...
would the rose not be as pure as you.
in it's entirety...
the rose could never be,
as beautiful as the lady,
for which I'd give it to.........
nice use of descriptive words^^
it was a really sweet poem and it had a nice flow
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Hmmm...a very nice style... it's a very short poem... but it says more than the beauty of the person you'd want to give a rose to.... and pure could mean something that has to do with her heart... nice... a very deep poem...
^^ keep it up...
gah..this part is confusing @.@Quote:
would the rose not be as pure as you