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Oct 06, 2006, 12:32 PM
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 Credits: 16,454 | rose must not die I get a rose handed to me by this man And he says '' im always going to be with you as long as this rose is still alive'' So every day I keep the rose thinking who was that man and should if keep it? So I have now had the rose 2 years and it’s still not dead Wile im sick and dieing I still think who was he? And thinking why is the rose not dead along time ago But now im dieing and the rose is dieing with me So my last request is that this rose to be bared with me There’s the light and the man is there he puts out his hand and says '' don’t be afraid the worst is done gave me your hand and we Will live in haven from now on''
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Oct 06, 2006, 12:44 PM
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  Member of 22 yr old Club  Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: In my imagination restricted by British Society!
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Oct 06, 2006, 12:49 PM
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Credits: 16,454 | yeah i thoght it did too lol but thats what happens when u tell me to try and make them longer lol
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Oct 06, 2006, 02:29 PM
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Credits: 3,194 | story poems like that are always the best, in my mind. I really liked that one, and wish to see more. No matter who writes them.
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Oct 07, 2006, 03:03 AM
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Credits: 16,454 | ok.............. i didnt think it was like that and think you for the nice comments
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Oct 11, 2006, 01:17 PM
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Oct 21, 2006, 01:08 AM
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: rose must not die Your welcome equinn! But your poems are really good! I'll be looking for more of your work! Maybe you could give me some pointers on my poem Anguish! It fell all the way to page two!
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