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    Rose in the wind

    In the warm and sunny morning as I slowly wake up to reality
    My eyes rusty with tiredness,
    I walk my way through the balcony
    And let the cool air gently caress my smooth face

    Closing away, my eyes empty again
    I remember the times when we were the birds
    … Free, free to fly and sing
    The thoughts begin to fold up around me

    I remember those times
    Uninhibited by selfishness, anger, jealousy
    So innocent, exultant and our joyous company
    They just give me a smile and a sense of warmth

    I wish this could just go on and never end
    My smile fades away, and a tear replaces it instead
    All my thoughts and warmth crumple
    And all there is left, is the anticipation of the familiar love

    The wind gently blows away from me
    And brings back the rose petals
    I gently grab them in my hands
    I vividly remember now. All those smiles

    Just like the rose petals don’t know where the wind is going to take them
    You will never know how much you guys mean to me.
    Please don’t leave me alone
    I’m here, waiting for you

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    Re: Rose in the wind

    very nice poem Rushil..I liked it...^___^its very sweet. ^_^

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    Re: Rose in the wind

    Nice poem, rave. I hope whoever this poem is to... I hope it all works out for you guys. Memories and images rush through this poem.

    Nice work, rave-chan

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    Re: Rose in the wind

    Nice poem u have done there Rave,But it a bit to sweet for me rather darker ones .
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    Re: Rose in the wind

    Well I am not taking names those people should know it's based on them ...

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    Re: Rose in the wind

    aww thank poem is soo sweet rave kinda sad to ( dont know why tho ??) but i really liked it alot ^__^ 10/10

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    Re: Rose in the wind

    Awesome poem Rave! The image it presents in my mind is amazing I can actually put myself in this position and realize the unwavering feeling of being lonely! Keep up the great work!

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    Re: Rose in the wind

    I like the second version of your poem gots good intension lol, hope to see more rave. oo and you make a really good poem writer too.

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