very nice poem Rushil..I liked it...^___^its very sweet. ^_^
In the warm and sunny morning as I slowly wake up to reality
My eyes rusty with tiredness,
I walk my way through the balcony
And let the cool air gently caress my smooth face
Closing away, my eyes empty again
I remember the times when we were the birds
… Free, free to fly and sing
The thoughts begin to fold up around me
I remember those times
Uninhibited by selfishness, anger, jealousy
So innocent, exultant and our joyous company
They just give me a smile and a sense of warmth
I wish this could just go on and never end
My smile fades away, and a tear replaces it instead
All my thoughts and warmth crumple
And all there is left, is the anticipation of the familiar love
The wind gently blows away from me
And brings back the rose petals
I gently grab them in my hands
I vividly remember now. All those smiles
Just like the rose petals don’t know where the wind is going to take them
You will never know how much you guys mean to me.
Please don’t leave me alone
I’m here, waiting for you
Nice poem, rave. I hope whoever this poem is to... I hope it all works out for you guys. Memories and images rush through this poem.
Nice work, rave-chan
Nice poem u have done there Rave,But it a bit to sweet for me rather darker ones .
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aww thank poem is soo sweet rave kinda sad to ( dont know why tho ??) but i really liked it alot ^__^ 10/10
Awesome poem Rave! The image it presents in my mind is amazing I can actually put myself in this position and realize the unwavering feeling of being lonely! Keep up the great work!
I like the second version of your poem gots good intension lol, hope to see more rave. oo and you make a really good poem writer too.