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    Roses

    A boquet of roses are pressed behind my back
    For you, I have gathered what many lack
    A heart of stone, engraved lies your name
    A love so boundless, I cannot contain
    Eyes that can see what many cannot
    A finder of treasures this old world forgot
    Eyes that have spotted, amongst this sorrow
    An angel, a saint whose wings angel borrow...


    Someone plase tell me how i should finish it...i feel like its not complete.
    Last edited by Moose; Sep 28, 2011 at 10:21 AM.

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    Hmmm... I don't know whether you will like this or not, but i'l give it a try.

    Eyes that have spotted, amongst this sorrow
    An angel, a saint whose wings angel borrow
    A myriad of colours, hidden in depths
    secret and silent, forever to be kept.

    I don't really like the last line but if it helped let me know.

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