ConradGuravitch103

Knocked him down,
and stole his crown!
The Lights gone with
the departure of the
Royal Court,
theres no sunshine any more.

Made the mistake,
thought that I won,
but I wound up done!
Oh woe is me!
Why'd that happen?
The Royal Courts gone,
took the Sol with them.

So here I sit with my new
crown and throne,
down and alone,
waiting, just waiting,
for that glorious sun to return.



Thoughts and suggestions please

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P.R. Princess

thats pretty good. the rithym was good and
the flow was great.
i dont know what its about though.lol. >.< sorry conrad.lol.
but yea it was a good peom.
keep it up !

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