+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: Ruined life

  1. #1
    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Location
    Somewhere in SD.
    Posts
    2,596
    Thanks
    17
    Thanked 24 Times in 23 Posts

    Post Ruined life

    Brother I don't know why you are acting like this
    But I can't see that person of who you were
    I saw a little boy with a perfect life
    Who was planning out his future

    I don't understand why you are in this situation
    Doing bad things and hurting a lot of people
    Getting into fights and kicked out of school
    Getting into drugs and feeding your life through a needle

    Though you are family
    But to me my brother
    You are another lost soul to the world
    Someone who can't forgive his mother

    Someone who had fallen into the life of gangs
    Following the path of alcohol
    Running so deep into that thick mist
    And that ain't all.

  2. #2
    Chtonian Slayer Astaroth may be famous one day Astaroth's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    you really do not want to know
    Posts
    525
    Thanks
    23
    Thanked 49 Times in 47 Posts

    Re: Ruined life

    Very good........even though the rhythm is a little bit off....I liked the words since they are full of meaning.........
    Nicely done
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. Life
    By SasukePorter in forum Poems
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: Nov 15, 2007, 10:54 AM
  2. A Lonely Life Is The Best Life?
    By HolderOfTheDarkChalice in forum Poems
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: Jun 18, 2007, 11:16 PM
  3. Hentai+gf = ruined relationship? Right?
    By Darkpaladin64 in forum Anime
    Replies: 87
    Last Post: May 24, 2007, 02:48 PM
  4. life
    By nalevankomichael in forum Poems
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: May 21, 2007, 12:22 PM
  5. I cant beleive how they ruined saiyuki
    By Mya_Nastume in forum Anime
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: Jun 07, 2006, 12:40 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts