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    Running Scared

    Running scared...

    Scared of the last few days and
    of the arguments we've had.
    Afraid of thought of him and I
    wanting to kill each other.

    Walking tall...

    Throughout all this negativity,
    I still hold my head up high;
    because I will not let whatever
    happens in the future hold me back.

    Laying low...

    Hiding my thoughts from people
    and cloaking my emotions, in order
    to make people think that I am
    doing just fine. But, I'm secretly
    going crazy on the inside.

    Biting my tounge...

    Trying my best to watch my words
    and to choose my battles. Doing
    everything in my power to keep my
    cool. Keeping my vocabulary in check
    in order to keep the peace.

    Still running scared...

    Because, like the chicken with
    his head chopped off, I can't help
    the way I feel and I cannot sit
    idle, while the world is crumbling
    around me. So, I run...


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    Re: Running Scared

    Eekk.. such ending verse... *rubs my throat*

    Hmm.. a nice written poem... love the way of your wording and the style... keep it up

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    Re: Running Scared

    Still running scared...

    Because, like the chicken with
    his head chopped off, I can't help
    the way I feel and I cannot sit
    idle, while the world is crumbling
    around me. So, I run...

    I loved that part! ilove yor work! yeah i dont think any one can just "sit" and do nothing! Great job keep up the good work! can't wait for more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Running Scared

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Eekk.. such ending verse... *rubs my throat*

    Hmm.. a nice written poem... love the way of your wording and the style... keep it up
    Quote Originally Posted by highteckdudu View Post
    Still running scared...

    Because, like the chicken with
    his head chopped off, I can't help
    the way I feel and I cannot sit
    idle, while the world is crumbling
    around me. So, I run...

    I loved that part! ilove yor work! yeah i dont think any one can just "sit" and do nothing! Great job keep up the good work! can't wait for more!

    Thanks you guys! I'm impressed by the fact that you both like the same part of my poem. ^_^

    I appreciate your comments!


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    Re: Running Scared

    The brakes do a really noce job of streching what seems to be a short poem. I like the use of simple sintinces to slow the reader and help them think more deeply.


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    Re: Running Scared

    Well I like the same part as highteck and rayme. It made me cry because despite the male voice I feel exactly like this. Fairly often. I really really like this poem.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Running Scared

    Thanks for commenting on this poem, you two! ^_^

    Bratling, I know how you feel. And I wish I didn't have to feel the same, believe me.


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