" Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

viper11025 · Aug 01, 2006, 06:32 AM

Sacrifice:

As I slowly fade away,
Don’t stare at me,
Don’t cry for me,
This is my sacrifice,
My sacrifice for you,
And only you,
Don’t die for me,
Don’t bleed for me,
Never give in,
Only I know your pain,
You hide it with a mask of pride,
It will destroy you in the end,
That’s why I am doing this,
This is my sacrifice.

( I'm back guys and gals.

)

*Blade X* · Aug 01, 2006, 08:06 AM

wen were u ever gone???

anyways welcome back n nice greet everyone with a poem abt naruto n the scarifice he was forced to make in order to save the village

*ketaro* · Aug 01, 2006, 08:07 PM

*claps* that was really great, nice poem, keep it up.

Miki. · Aug 02, 2006, 12:43 PM

- i remember that episode in Naruto where that kid fight Naruto and Sasuke in that mirror dome thing and how he dies for the person whom he looked up to. it was very emotional and your poem relates to it. Keep up the work. ^-^

and welcome back. =p

*Kasai* · Aug 02, 2006, 12:50 PM

I'd like to seem some elaboration in the poem. Other than that? The structure was okay.

Full. Metal Melody · Aug 02, 2006, 03:26 PM

*claps* aww thats really good made me cry *claps*

viper11025 · Aug 03, 2006, 08:11 AM

Tell you the truth,this poem works for about 27 of Naruto episodes.

Dark_Ichigo_X · Aug 03, 2006, 08:29 AM

good poem, it was cool and awsome.

Pride_Edward · Aug 25, 2006, 05:09 AM

Awesome one....hope you visit my poem Pride too...tnx....

itachi uchiha · Oct 26, 2006, 08:47 AM

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Originally Posted by Blade X

wen were u ever gone???

anyways welcome back n nice greet everyone with a poem abt naruto n the scarifice he was forced to make in order to save the village

hey yea it nice poem abt naruto? so just go to say hey how are u my name is jessica and waz up?

*hellknight* · Oct 26, 2006, 09:04 AM

good poem, lot of love in this one and it sounds more like a person would give anything to stop it from happening, keep it up

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viper11025 Under Surveilance Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: " Unknown & Unseen" Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 381	" Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto Sacrifice: As I slowly fade away, Don’t stare at me, Don’t cry for me, This is my sacrifice, My sacrifice for you, And only you, Don’t die for me, Don’t bleed for me, Never give in, Only I know your pain, You hide it with a mask of pride, It will destroy you in the end, That’s why I am doing this, This is my sacrifice. ( I'm back guys and gals. )
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