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    " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    Sacrifice:

    As I slowly fade away,
    Don’t stare at me,
    Don’t cry for me,
    This is my sacrifice,
    My sacrifice for you,
    And only you,
    Don’t die for me,
    Don’t bleed for me,
    Never give in,
    Only I know your pain,
    You hide it with a mask of pride,
    It will destroy you in the end,
    That’s why I am doing this,
    This is my sacrifice.

    ( I'm back guys and gals. )

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    Re: " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    wen were u ever gone???

    anyways welcome back n nice greet everyone with a poem abt naruto n the scarifice he was forced to make in order to save the village

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    *claps* that was really great, nice poem, keep it up.

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    Re: " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    - i remember that episode in Naruto where that kid fight Naruto and Sasuke in that mirror dome thing and how he dies for the person whom he looked up to. it was very emotional and your poem relates to it. Keep up the work. ^-^

    and welcome back. =p

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    Re: " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    I'd like to seem some elaboration in the poem. Other than that? The structure was okay.
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    Re: " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    *claps* aww thats really good made me cry *claps*

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    Re: " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    Tell you the truth,this poem works for about 27 of Naruto episodes.

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    Re: " Sacrifice " A tribute to Naruto

    good poem, it was cool and awsome.

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