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    Sad Girl

    She is really happy
    Waiting to see her dad
    Who has been working all day
    Hoping nothing go's bad

    Standing by a window
    She has a smile on her face
    Daddy isn't showing up
    Is he a disgrace?

    Phone ringing in the house
    Daddy calling from work
    Say's he got's another shift
    Is his boss a jerk?

    Little girl crying in tears
    Daddy can hear her on the line
    Try's to comfort her
    Say's everything will be fine.

    He'll try and take care of her
    But she doens't care about that
    All she wants is her daddy
    And stop treating her like a little brat.

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    Re: Sad Girl

    Very nice Poem. I pictured the whole story and felt the saddness for the child.

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    Re: Sad Girl

    that was a very cool poem i know people who can relate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: Sad Girl

    *big sigh*
    That was sweet mix with sad feeling I love read it ..but the most this ..

    He'll try and take care of her
    But she doens't care about that
    All she wants is her daddy
    And stop treating her like a little brat

    Really Nice ..Keep it up..

    Foolish beating

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