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    a sad love poem

    once i saw you
    once you saw me
    we loved each other like we knew each other from the start to finsh
    but me and you will never be
    cos were from two totaly diffrent worlds
    so we must go your sepret ways
    and maybe just maybe we will meet again
    and we will not be parted

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    Re: a sad love poem

    T.T So sweet, so true. *Emotional troubles* You got it all out, the fisr try, not even over doing it~
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    Re: a sad love poem

    Yet again, I like the theme of the poem, Equinn, but incorporate a little more elaboration. And, do the usual, a small grammer and spell check. To also point out, make sure the pronouns relate:

    so we must go your sepret ways

    It should be "our," not your.

    Anyway, a neat little poem! Work more with it!!

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    Re: a sad love poem

    lol thanks k and kedar and thanks for the spell cheak kedar ^_^ *hugs* ^_^

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    Re: a sad love poem

    Quote Originally Posted by equinn
    lol thanks k and kedar and thanks for the spell cheak kedar ^_^ *hugs* ^_^
    Eheheh, your welcome, Equinn. Now, let's see how you will use my comments and the comments of others to your advantage.

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    Re: a sad love poem

    -^_^- lets just see what happens lol they might not be good lol -^__^-

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