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    Sad Secret Love Thoughts

    Here's a new song that I just wrote.I guess it's a bit sad but I think it came out like I wanted it 2.And sorry that it's a bit long,please still read though.I hope everyone enjoys it.Please comment and thanks for reading


    Title-Sad Secret Love Thoughts


    My other half,Please come forth
    Speak to me,The truth only
    Tell me what I need to hear
    Even if it brings forth more tears...

    "Tell me your secrets"

    I keep you at bay,for both are hearts safety
    But you keep coming,You wont back down
    Why must you do this? I thought that we had been through this?
    Why must you try to break down my barriers?...

    "Why must you hide from me?"

    I don't know why,I just need to hide
    For reasons unknown,I feel like i'm going below
    I reach our for someone,Please anyone
    Take my hand I beg you,Please...

    "If that is what you wish,Then reach for me"

    My other half,Please come forth
    Speak to me,The truth only
    Tell me what I need to hear
    Even if it brings forth more tears...

    "Will you ever let me inside your heart?"

    I cry for you everynight,cause of my lose
    You left me and will never be coming back
    I understand that,but I still want you to come back
    Please,come back to me...I beg you...

    "Do you really wish for my return?"

    Yes.Yes,I want you back
    Will you please give me another chance?
    I beg and plead for your return
    Will you please come back to me?...

    "Are you sure i'm truly what you wish for?"

    I cry myself to sleep
    Because of what I did that night
    I don't know if I could ever be forgiven
    I just want you to love me...

    "You already have my love and much more"

    My other half,Please come forth
    Speak to me,The truth only
    Tell me what I need to hear
    Even if it brings forth more tears...

    "My deartest love.You are forgiven even though you have done no wrong.I wll always and forever...love you."...
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    Re: Sad Secret Love Thoughts

    Oh my that is so good sis. Some singer should record that cause I think it would be a big hit.

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    Re: Sad Secret Love Thoughts

    Wow that is not bad.....its great.....

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    Re: Sad Secret Love Thoughts

    Thank you soooooooo very much big sis i'm glad that you liked it I'm hopeing someday some singer might lol

    And thank you Kal_El I'm glad that you liked it also
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    Re: Sad Secret Love Thoughts

    I don't know why,I just need to hide
    For reasons unknown,I feel like i'm going below
    I reach our for someone,Please anyone
    Take me hand I beg you,Please...

    i love this part of the song it sort of reminds me of how begging
    for forgivness for something is a good thing but sometimes the
    forgivness is gone they go to far or dont care enough and only
    regret it after the fact. i like the fact you made that clear in the
    song but its good it had a happy ending. very awesome song sis
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Thank you very much for the kool comment big bro I'm glad that you liked it.
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    Re: Sad Secret Love Thoughts

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Thank you soooooooo very much big sis i'm glad that you liked it I'm hopeing someday some singer might lol

    And thank you Kal_El I'm glad that you liked it also
    No problem, and please you can call me Kal if you want to.....

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    Re: Sad Secret Love Thoughts

    OKay then The thank you very much for reading and commenting on my song Kal.
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