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    Sadly- coming to an end

    I love you, well… I DID love you,
    Remember my feelings for you?
    They might change but never should you
    You had to leave I understand

    You love this man dearly, you told me
    I was happy that you were happy
    That he could cherish you forever
    He could love you more than me

    I am not mad at you silly,
    I am just happy to see you two together,
    Because you have been through a lot my dear,
    I hope you will remember me

    But before we left to our own separate ways,
    I gave you my ring that will reveal you my feelings
    The ring is blessed keep it safe
    The ring I gave you, I hope, will be there for you forever

    You might think I’m weird, but I simply cared too much
    Smiles fill up my face instead of tears,
    I feel joy and pain; all those mixed emotions
    I enjoyed my time with you

    Yes enjoyed, as my weak heart is nourishing-
    -The last parts of my body, beating its last
    It feels like it’s pumping more pain than blood…
    Sadly my life is coming to an end

    I had been hiding it so you wouldn’t have to suffer,
    I am glad I took away your pain in one-way or another
    I’ll miss you dearly… my heart is stopping
    Slowly but surely I hope to see light

    Slowly tears roll down my face, my body on the floor
    My body growing cold and numb
    My heart stopping… no more tears…
    I remember I said no goodbyes for long,
    But this is a goodbye forever

    I’m sorr-----

    This is just a poem people

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    Re: Sadly- comming to an end

    rushil............................................
    i loved your poem. it sounds familiar.

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    Re: Sadly- comming to an end

    Its pretty good! I like this poem.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Very cool and sad too. It does sound familar

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    yea its is sad and full of passion, nice poem

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    I love you poem. It gave me a feeling but anyways its good *smiles*
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    This poem is sooo sad! but really good, i enjoyed reading it, i really can feel the emotions, and the purity in this poem.
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Blleeeeeearrrgghhh!!! The soap opera-ass writings of a guy who just...can't....let...go. Dude, move on! Go smoke some weed or something......geez.Focus your poetry on some other subject than the " I lost my girlfriend so I'm gonna kill myself cause I can't enjoy masturbation" thing.Change is goood, grasshoppa....
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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