rushil............................................
i loved your poem. it sounds familiar.
I love you, well… I DID love you,
Remember my feelings for you?
They might change but never should you
You had to leave I understand
You love this man dearly, you told me
I was happy that you were happy
That he could cherish you forever
He could love you more than me
I am not mad at you silly,
I am just happy to see you two together,
Because you have been through a lot my dear,
I hope you will remember me
But before we left to our own separate ways,
I gave you my ring that will reveal you my feelings
The ring is blessed keep it safe
The ring I gave you, I hope, will be there for you forever
You might think I’m weird, but I simply cared too much
Smiles fill up my face instead of tears,
I feel joy and pain; all those mixed emotions
I enjoyed my time with you
Yes enjoyed, as my weak heart is nourishing-
-The last parts of my body, beating its last
It feels like it’s pumping more pain than blood…
Sadly my life is coming to an end
I had been hiding it so you wouldn’t have to suffer,
I am glad I took away your pain in one-way or another
I’ll miss you dearly… my heart is stopping
Slowly but surely I hope to see light
Slowly tears roll down my face, my body on the floor
My body growing cold and numb
My heart stopping… no more tears…
I remember I said no goodbyes for long,
But this is a goodbye forever
I’m sorr-----
This is just a poem people
rushil............................................
i loved your poem. it sounds familiar.
Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
Its pretty good! I like this poem.
Thanks lifeforce! (:
Very cool and sad too. It does sound familar
yea its is sad and full of passion, nice poem
I love you poem. It gave me a feeling but anyways its good *smiles*
♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
This poem is sooo sad! but really good, i enjoyed reading it, i really can feel the emotions, and the purity in this poem.
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
Blleeeeeearrrgghhh!!! The soap opera-ass writings of a guy who just...can't....let...go. Dude, move on! Go smoke some weed or something......geez.Focus your poetry on some other subject than the " I lost my girlfriend so I'm gonna kill myself cause I can't enjoy masturbation" thing.Change is goood, grasshoppa....
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Move Along.
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