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    Sadness

    Sadness is all I know.
    Depression hits me like a ton
    of bricks and weighs me down;
    perpetually keeping me in slow-motion.

    Heartache is all I feel.
    The knife slowly turns in between
    my ribs, as my emotions pour out
    like a water fountain.

    Guilt is all that surrounds me.
    My love for you causes me to
    regret every mistake I've ever made.
    My love for you is why I cry.

    The pain is neverending.
    It will probably never cease. Though
    I may try to hide it from the rest
    of the world, I know that I will never
    stop loving you, which is why it hurts so bad.

    Sadness is all I know...


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    Re: Sadness

    WOW sprout you have a way of spending your emotions on a poem, so to speak. kind of like what I do. anyways on a serious note you did a great job on this one and I like it over your others keep it up buddy.
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    Re: Sadness

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    WOW sprout you have a way of spending your emotions on a poem, so to speak. kind of like what I do. anyways on a serious note you did a great job on this one and I like it over your others keep it up buddy.
    Thanks for your comment, Ichigo. I appreciate it. I wasn't really writing for show of skill with this one. I wish I could write something that wasn't based on my feelings to tell you the truth, because I'm so tired...


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    Re: Sadness

    Sadness is all I know.
    Depression hits me like a ton
    of bricks and weighs me down;
    perpetually keeping me in slow-motion
    thats very true...when you are sad and felt depressed..or painful... it is as if time slows down....

    nicely done.. keep it up ^^

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    Re: Sadness

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Thanks for your comment, Ichigo. I appreciate it. I wasn't really writing for show of skill with this one. I wish I could write something that wasn't based on my feelings to tell you the truth, because I'm so tired...
    but when you are sad and depressed that is normally what you write on. (me I write on that alone mainly)
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    Re: Sadness

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    but when you are sad and depressed that is normally what you write on. (me I write on that alone mainly)
    Yeah, typically, that's what I write about. But I'm making myself sick from it, I think. I even gave myself a gray hair. >_<


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    Re: Sadness

    YOur poems are so sad, i feel like... i cant explaine it, you a have a way with words! Keep it up! I'd love to see more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Sadness

    Quote Originally Posted by highteckdudu View Post
    YOur poems are so sad, i feel like... i cant explaine it, you a have a way with words! Keep it up! I'd love to see more!
    As sad as my work may be recently, it's good to know you still like it. Sorry for the extremely depressing writing. Life sucks right about now, so that's all I can produce. I hope you like my future writings as well.


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