HolderOfTheDarkChalice

As the finger tips slide gracefully across
the ivory , a memory seems to come to
mind like a black and white movie with no
sound , a tear can be felt as the memory
plays on , and as the ivory is touched
more lovingly i sigh is let out.

Moonlight reflects through the window
as candle light flickers by the window,
the silence is defining as echos in the
room fill with sadness , time passes so slowly
now as the melody never changes a heart
aches for companionship.

The room full of chill the fingers never
waver from there intent to play out that
lonelyness only the moon seems to realise
the movie plays on now as they kiss and
a hand goes to the waist and the embrace
more passionate.

The key strokes play out the scene so well
as the ivory moves so slow and full of imagery
a tear drops to the keys as they ache so much
from loosing that which meant so much to them
with a single sharp pain to the heart.

Life filled with sadness and lonelyness makes
the ivory seem so alive witg mourning as the movie
plays its final clip and she falls from him still look into
his eyes a picture that will never go away , as the melody
slows so do the tears but the heart aches will never
go away.

this poem is a story/poem about how someone
just fades away in the stillness of the night while
playing by moonlight the imgaes of his lost love
missing her so much that he plays for the memeorys to keep
comming back because its the only thing he has left of something
very specail.

any comments or sugestions are welcomed

__________________

zig93

Wow.... I'm sorry I have to wipe my tears away. That was so good. You let me feel your pain. You sould write like that more often I loved. Sorry I cant say more about it.

KuwiRules145

Oh wow!!! hat was the most perfect poem I have every READ!!!!!! Your such an amazing poetic!!!!!! So much inside that poem well to me so I hope to see more!

__________________
♡♥Anime Life♥♡

CherryBlossom18

Such a beautiful poem and so romantic and yet so sad. I could imagine everything that was happening as I read it which made it more wonderful. Fantastic job on this and I look forward to reading your next one.

__________________
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!

Lasura

Hmmm... I like it... hmm... but why do you put so much feelings and everything in ivory? And what do you mean with ivory... an ivory item? I come to think about chess pieces, did I get it right- the game of life? chess?
This is a quite sad poem and I might not understand it just because I try never to wallow in my memories...

And a sugestion- don't give out this important information about what the poem is about just like that, I think people should earn it- let them think about it themselfes and then in the end, tell them if they're right 'bout what the poem is about... Well, you could at least mark the ending of the poem and the starting of your comment so I could stop and think for a while before reading what you've tried to say there...

__________________

My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

HolderOfTheDarkChalice

true i wil do that nxt time my spacing is a bit bad but i can do that

and thanks for everyones comments i really aprecaite them

__________________