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    "Sanction Your Heart"

    They say they want to walk in darkness.
    I tell them to follow me,
    "I shall take you there."

    They say they want to play with blood.
    I tell them to follow me,
    "I shall show you where."

    They say they want to sleep with sin.
    I tell them to follow me,
    "I shall lead you there."

    They say they want to sanction their heart.
    I tell them to leave me,
    "I will not dare."

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: "Sanction Your Heart"

    that's a really cool poem, you should really write/post more. ^_^

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    Re: "Sanction Your Heart"

    I love it when people make an extra effort to toy with font color and size. I think the use of color is an effective way of attracting the reader, and invoke feeling. It its just one of many tasteful elements of this well written poem.
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