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Reply With Quote*looks around*W-O-W. The rhyming was awesome, it made me go up..and down xD Your vocab never cease to amaze me O_O I need to check the dictionary. The last stanza was great, like a chanting style, then it ends. Love it!
Saunter and Weep
Weep O’ weep,
no sleep to keep,
for fear of tears,
brings worthless years.
Let it flow, let it go,
tear stains upon the snow.
With sad December wandering,
melancholia and sauntering.
Cacophonies of memories,
symphonies of bellowing.
Head banging and gut ripping,
self ashamed and blaming.
Rocking back and forth,
Forth and back,
Back to north,
And forth to black.
Rosy kisses of bliss,
That slip the slit
of wrists for gifts,
With the mists of bliss.
Ignorance,
Putrescence,
Arrogance,
Weep.
Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23
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really wow man! hehehe, nice rhyming there..
you must be really good in making poems huh?
do you have an inspiration?
because they say, you can come up with
a good poem when you are in the mood and
when you are in love...
nice poem mate!
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
I think that it's a wonderful poem... ^_^ I love your use of vocabulary... ^_^
Hey.. thanks.. yeah.. I was feeling.. lonely when I wrote this.. missing my family and friends and what not.
Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23
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