Artistic Anarchy (Oct 16, 2011)
My heart is shattered, my blood is splattered
A relieving sensation fills my body
I'm getting weaker by the minute
Falling in and out of consciousness
Someone just hold me tight tell me it's going to be alright
save me from my insanity
The blade sinks deeper into my flesh,blood pouring out
Every scar haunting me existance
Burring me head into my knees
Why let this missery go on
Is this who I have become
Every morning I wake up crying
Night terrors took control
What's happening to me
Someone just hold me tight
Tell me it'll be alright
Why wont anyone care for me
Save me
I can't do it on my own
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I wrote this because I was reading this one manga my friend wrote in his notebook and I really could relate to the main charater. It's almost like I was her. It turns out he based his manga on my life! So I decided to write this.
Last edited by Kharlieboo; Oct 13, 2011 at 10:53 AM.
~making scence is so taco~
Artistic Anarchy (Oct 16, 2011)
Omg i had chills when i read this.......its great i think
I found him and I love him with all my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A couple grammar issues but no biggieI liked your poem, i would love more detail in some parts but very nice.
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
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