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    Save me from my insanity


    My heart is shattered, my blood is splattered
    A relieving sensation fills my body
    I'm getting weaker by the minute
    Falling in and out of consciousness
    Someone just hold me tight tell me it's going to be alright
    save me from my insanity
    The blade sinks deeper into my flesh,blood pouring out
    Every scar haunting me existance
    Burring me head into my knees
    Why let this missery go on
    Is this who I have become
    Every morning I wake up crying
    Night terrors took control
    What's happening to me
    Someone just hold me tight
    Tell me it'll be alright
    Why wont anyone care for me
    Save me
    I can't do it on my own
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    I wrote this because I was reading this one manga my friend wrote in his notebook and I really could relate to the main charater. It's almost like I was her. It turns out he based his manga on my life! So I decided to write this.
    Last edited by Kharlieboo; Oct 13, 2011 at 10:53 AM.
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    Re: Save me from my insanity

    Omg i had chills when i read this.......its great i think
    I found him and I love him with all my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: Save me from my insanity

    A couple grammar issues but no biggie I liked your poem, i would love more detail in some parts but very nice.
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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