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    Saving Me

    Baby, I'm glad that I'm here
    Now, I can see it so clear
    I know He has better plans for me
    I know He tries to save me
    Let's go through this together
    Whenever things go bad, we'll still have each other
    You have my complete trust, you're part of my life
    I know that everything's alright

    Did you know...that you changed my life
    You really did, baby
    You saved me, saved me, saved me
    Did you know...you make me smile
    You really did, baby
    You saved me, saved me, saved me

    Baby, are you glad that I'm here with you
    Sitting here and can't stop thinking about you
    Now I'm no longer confused
    My heart was full of bruises
    You came and healed
    What's this I feel?
    Let's go through this together
    We'll always have each other

    Did you know...that you changed my life?
    You really did, baby
    You saved me, saved me, saved me
    Did you know...you make me smile?
    You really did, baby
    You saved me, saved me, saved me
    (repeated)
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    Dedicated to my love. He knows who he is <3
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Man this is so sweet! ^.^ Very well explained, very well written and it touched me ^_^ Awesome job I mean it

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    It's a very nice poem for3v3r lost...Hope to see you post some more poems 'coz I can see a poet's spirit unto you! ^_^

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    Thank you! It came to me and I could feel it so I wanted to write it out. =P Glad that you both liked it!
    Last edited by For3v3r_Lost; Oct 09, 2006 at 11:10 AM.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    I feel the emotion of Love in this poem perfectly! Very well written and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Outstanding job 5 out of 5 from me!

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    Thank you! Yeah it took a while just to think of one good poem/song. >.< Glad you liked it! Thanks again ^_^
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    i haven't seen one of these fantastic love poems since years...
    its so great!
    Im going to keep it, in my poem collection


    ''Now, I can see it so clear''

    UR IN DEEP LOVE bloody



    perdoname michelle!

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    That is a really good poem. I could feel so much emotion from it. It was so sweet to write it about your someone special. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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