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    Say I love you. I dare you.

    Me, here is me
    A loner, looser, a worthless person
    No, not even a person … I am nothing
    Say whatever you want, tell me whatever you wish to
    Inside, I know I am nothing

    They say I am one of a kind
    Am I really? Hell no!
    I don’t even have a purpose …
    They say I look good, but looks can be deceiving
    I’m meant to be this way …

    I would punch myself,
    Punish myself for my sins,
    Starve myself with intent to torture myself,
    Slap myself till my body went numb
    Cry till my eyes went sore and red
    Darn this world,
    Darn this body,
    Darn this soul
    Darn this incompetent life!

    I grieve just by looking at the people,
    Who have their perfect significant other,
    In the streets, in their homes, in their private rooms … everywhere
    Caressing each other with love in their eyes

    Maybe I wasn’t meant to love, maybe I’m just meant to be lonely
    Lonely with only fake smiles and false joy that are left with me
    What am I? Why can’t I get what I wanted?
    But who would love someone like me,
    Someone who rejects every feeling for love he gets,
    Someone who’s alone, cold and miserable

    I stand there in the street, every time I see someone; they have their one mate
    One mate for life who will always stay beside their beloved one
    The wind stops, like it’s given up trying on me
    I don’t blame it; I’m better alone anyway

    I won't be in her heart like the other
    I won't be with her without him thinking about her
    I will never have her heart to myself
    I will never be there to touch her
    Like you did to him
    You will always be one step ahead,
    and you know how to say your words.
    Leaving me all tongue twisted. Not able to tell
    Her. How much I want her

    because I will always be second best.
    Yes I know what I am and I closed my eyes to it
    I made myself believe that those guys didn't matter
    Even when you cried over them, and I was there to hold you
    When you loved another than myself, and I was there to help,
    and helped you when You mourned, but I could never have you.

    I can't have you now can I?
    Even thou I have your hand, but I don't have your heart.
    I hate being second best.
    So I will leave, and I won't think twice
    it is best this way. For you and for me
    you won't have to lie to your heart, and I won't to mine
    you won't have to say words you don't mean.
    Just because I love you. I don't want to make you love me.

    I want none of you pity, or your mercy.
    Right know. I just want you to be happy, but I know I can't

    I wasn't lying when I said I love you.


    I hate the loving lies we told.
    I hate the ending that we have.
    I hate the way you just left (and again)
    I hate the endless emails that made us up.
    I hate everything.

    Sure I might not have the looks.
    Sure I might not have been posting flirty comments.
    Sure I might not have what it takes to be like them
    Sure I might not have been keeping up.

    Sure I might not be "cool", "smart", "dominative" and all the shits.

    But it doesn't give you the ****ing right to go,
    And ask those rascals out while you're with me.

    You break my ****ing heart.
    You REALLY ****ING DO.

    You have only one chance to gain my trust back.
    Only one chance to make me love you again.

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    Re: Say I love you. I dare you.

    aww that hurting really and very touching ...some sentences very hurting for example this one..

    I grieve just by looking at the people,
    Who have their perfect significant other,
    In the streets, in their homes, in their private rooms … everywhere
    Caressing each other with love in their eyes

    ....but this poem really good work and true feeling..well done..
    Last edited by xxoxx; Nov 04, 2007 at 12:22 AM.

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Say I love you. I dare you.

    Such a great poem Rayme. Very touching and moving.

    I love the way you express emotion in the poem, such a great and powerful poem.

    I'd say this is one of the best, keep up the superb work.



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    Re: Say I love you. I dare you.

    Gahh, wrong poem you've got there buddy, I'm actually Rave_Grip. ^_^
    And, thanks.

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    Re: Say I love you. I dare you.

    Umm.. rayme? @.@ i did not wrote that.. some 1 is drunk

    Good poem there rave ... lots of emotion in that one..very well done..

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    Re: Say I love you. I dare you.

    Haha, it's actually a mixture of my previous poems, except for the last 2-3 paragraphs, which I wrote

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    Re: Say I love you. I dare you.

    awesome poem lots of emotion and its really long, i like it
    lovein this line more tho
    You break my ****ing heart.
    You REALLY ****ING DO.
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