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    saying goodbye to love...

    It has been almost four years of pain
    But still I have waited for you
    And still it never stopped to rain
    my eyes were wet too

    My heart's been ripped but still I'm smiling
    I'm glad my friends are here to stay
    Even though deep inside I'm really dying
    I love you almost everyday

    I knew that we'll never be together
    but even so I still tried for you to see me
    And you'll always be in my heart forever
    Your smiles, It always shines within me

    But every love has its ending and mine is not by death
    Anyway it's just a one-sided love
    I'll never regret that I love you until in my last breath
    And I always thanked the heavens up above for this love



    -sayonara-
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    Re: saying goodbye to love...

    The alternate rhyming effectively reaches its maximum level... Awesome job of yours... Liked it...

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