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Nov 07, 2006, 06:20 AM
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 Credits: 2,308 | saying goodbye to love... It has been almost four years of pain But still I have waited for you And still it never stopped to rain my eyes were wet too My heart's been ripped but still I'm smiling I'm glad my friends are here to stay Even though deep inside I'm really dying I love you almost everyday I knew that we'll never be together but even so I still tried for you to see me And you'll always be in my heart forever Your smiles, It always shines within me But every love has its ending and mine is not by death Anyway it's just a one-sided love I'll never regret that I love you until in my last breath And I always thanked the heavens up above for this love -sayonara- Last edited by pink_hana; Nov 07, 2006 at 06:33 AM. |
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Nov 07, 2006, 06:37 AM
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Credits: 901 | Re: saying goodbye to love... The alternate rhyming effectively reaches its maximum level... Awesome job of yours... Liked it... 
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