Sayonara Promise

Under the tree of hill
Setting aside the fields of emotions
Looking upon the weary motions
There she is standing by the tree
Longing the day to end the thee

Flawlessly swaying in the entangled desinty
She ran through the fields of obscurity hoping to find him
THe sunlight is fading into the dimless rim
Leaving her in the abyss of restlessness
There she said"Could it be the darkness?"

Endless obscurity in her mind flawed like wind
SHe was entangled in the past of their cherrished memories
Flowing in the waves of uncertainty
There he is standing in the fields of obscurity
There he bade "sayonara" and inform here to be fateful to him
Assuring the promise,there she bades farewell to his lover's rim

Wow. You know you have evolved so much from where you were at even like eight months ago. This poem tells a lot more than many previous ones that were much longer, and it has more of a rhyme scheme to it which makes it more readable.

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Wow. You know you have evolved so much from where you were at even like eight months ago. This poem tells a lot more than many previous ones that were much longer, and it has more of a rhyme scheme to it which makes it more readable.

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A poem of my classmate motivates me to do this one.,..
I was attempting to make a love story but it turns of I lacked of a love scene so it ended this way...