Thread: The scarecrow

I knew a forest back then when I was young
where the brook goes on and the birds sung
what caught my eye was the perplexing scarecrow
I knew one time I've seen him before
Oh! But I knew this couldn't be true
He laughed and danced and then he grew
He pulled out a pipe and played a song
Blew more into it and things went wrong
Purple smoke billowed from the intrument
I then saw the pipe and found out it was bent
I closed my eyes and took a stand
He went ahead and took my hand
Then he turned into a man
he stood in front of me looking very tall
but he had no face at all
he was gonna fall
my pupil got small
then I fell to bawl
he whispered in my ear
"you shouldn't lose to fear
there's things you need to hear
I'll always be right here"
Then suddenly a waterfall came into view
the aqua was crystal clear blue
I touched the surface gently
Like looking through a mirror
the faceless man then felt me
my voice got thinner
he grabbed my hand and gave me a card
the card contained one heart
it all became clear to thought
and then my eye he caught
his face came into focus
and stole my heart with a kiss
I felt lost to hate
It wasnt very late
I knew it was my fate
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well....anything improvements and comments? I dont mind taking on bad comments either. ^^