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    Scared?

    A lonely walk across an open
    field , a cool breeze blows through
    the tree's sounding as if somone
    is whispering , a snap of a twig
    you pause and look to see who is there.

    Nothing its just the wind leaves
    blow as branches move wildly as
    the wind blows them , i low moan
    is heard as you come to a path that
    leads into the darkness of the woods.

    You could go the long way which looks
    safer and there are street lights? , or
    you could save some time and take this
    shortcut save about 15 minutes?

    You decide the short cut and you walk
    on to the path now as the wind blow more
    and the the tree's creak and pop , and you
    hear another twig snap as if somone stepped
    on it , you quicken your pace just in case it isn't
    your imagination.

    As you approach the center of the woods
    it gets ominously quiet as you hear no
    wind ,moving branches or the near by traffic
    on the road , it is like someone muted the world
    and you can only hear your heart beat.

    A lump gets caught in your throat as you
    stand there listening , waiting , not sure what to
    expect but something is out there you just know it.
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    you can scare yourself in some situations it dosnt
    even have to be in the woods this poem is
    to show when your scared you get that foreboding
    feeling adn you notice all sorts of scary stuff.

    myself though i dont get scared really i am
    the guy that says *i wil be right back* because
    i dont think the dark is something to fear of course
    i am a bit dark my self so that could be why .

    comments and sugestiions are welcomed
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    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Scared?

    my my... what a theme... though i don't get it whole.. hmm...complicated to me.. im such a simpleton.. -.- nice descriptions man ^^ and the way the poem moves is nice ^^ i like it...

    But don't seem to flow much to me... :/

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