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    Scared of my faithfulness

    I feel your hand go thought me
    But you can see me

    When magic is this
    Why do you tend on hurting me like this?

    What have I done to deserve this?
    You’ve been the only I kiss

    You have been the only I hug, hold and cherish
    But yet you treat me like this

    I guess to you I’ve never been here
    And I’ve just been a ghost, you fear

    Do these hypnotic eyes scare you?
    Into doing things I don’t want you to do

    Do I really scare you that much?
    So much you can’t even bear my touch

    Ok I understand I am feared by you
    But do I scare you so much I get emotionally hurt

    I don’t want the both of us to get hurt
    And this feared relationship’ll never work

    I don’t want to hurt you anymore
    Don’t forget to close the door
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    Re: Scared of my faithfulness

    A few spelling and grammatical errors. Other than that? Pretty good.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Scared of my faithfulness

    Wow that was a good poem i hope you contiue to write more, and it is so true and well put.


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