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    Scarlet Rain

    Here's a song/poem that I just wrote.It's a new dark 1 of mine.I need 2 finally write soemthing dark again,with all of the love song and all around lol Oh and sorry if it's a bit long,still please read it.Please comment also,thanks


    Title-Scarlet Rain


    All left out in the Sad Cold Rain
    I'm so overwhelmed with all of this Pain
    It's so dark inside of here
    I can feel the chill of the Air,but I don't seem to care
    I just wish it was all over!...

    "I'm wishin for the End"

    I'm begin and pleding
    For the End to finally come
    I'm hopin and i'm prayin
    To fall and finally come to an End!...

    "I just wish the End will come"

    I'm all alone
    Sitting in the Sad Cold Rain,Tonight
    Thinking back on my sorry Life
    Like a movie it plays in my mind,over and over again
    I see all of the Happy times,but I also see all of the Sad
    There's not much left here for me
    So,why should I even stay?!...

    "I'm waiting for my Judgement,I hope it's the End"

    Sitting in this Sad Cold Rain,thinking of the Past
    I begin to Weep,for I wish for my finale Sleep
    The Pain is overwhelming me,I'm dieing on the inside
    I'm all Broken and Torn,I can't take it anymore!...

    "Why not just End it all?!"

    I could and I shall
    On this very Night
    Is when I will take my own Life
    Tonight will be the End!...

    "The End is closeing near"

    I raise this Sacred Blade
    High into the Sky
    I say my last Prayers
    And I stabe myself,Tonight!...

    "The End...I'm almost there"

    All left out in the Sad Cold Rain
    I'm so overwhelmed with all of this Pain
    It's so dark inside of here
    I can feel the chill of the Air,but I don't seem to care
    I just wish it was all over...
    And now it is!...

    "I'm almost to the...End"

    I close my eyes,as I fall to the Scarlet coverd ground
    I lay there gasping for one last breath
    Scarlet covers me and everything
    I begin to whisper my last words...

    "Finally...it's all over...I can finally go to sleep"...
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    Re: Scarlet Rain

    GRAY I LIKESES IT LOTS.... -huggs poem-
    SO GOOD YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!!! YEA YEA YEA
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Thanks alot Lost_Love I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. And i'll try 2 write more like this
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    Re: Scarlet Rain

    I close my eyes,as I fall to the Scarlet coverd ground
    I lay there gasping for one last breath
    Scarlet covers me and everything
    I begin to whisper mt last words...

    i like how you desribed the suicide here and
    wanted to die quickly and end the sufering
    and descriibing the blood flowing was sweet
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Thanks alot Big Bro I'm soooo happy that you liked it.
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    Re: Scarlet Rain

    Hey!!! not a bad poem, not a bad poem at all! i give it a 10/10. you need to write more poems like this!!!
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    Re: Scarlet Rain

    suicide...............bad................poem..... ............good............

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    Re: Scarlet Rain

    Thanks Master_Inuyasha I'm very happy that you liked it

    Thanks Bro Yeah I know it's bad,i'm just in a sad mood today lol
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