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    Heres a little poem i wrote last week, hope you guys like...

    My skin is like a map
    Showing me; reminding me where I was
    And how far ive come
    The remedies, the mixtures
    Nothing seems to make them fade
    Each space in-between is like a different page
    Telling a story that i'd never give away
    I wear long sleeves full of fear
    I look in the mirror; I swear that im okay-
    My skin is a burden
    A reminder
    A truth that I can never embrace
    A broken smile that can never be brought back
    Half-way smiling with these scars
    Inside im crying for someone to set me free
    I sit; I breathe
    Flesh rips apart like my own heart
    Exposing the only tears I have left
    Pools of crimson that fade away
    And all that remains are these scars...

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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    Re: Scars

    You really did tell a story with this one... I felt the pain and the visual of thought in this writing. It saddens me to think about people actually hurting oneself to feel alive, but then again I relate about wanting to be or feel alive... It is hard living be dead inside. But it is true that every scar tells a story... Keep up the good writing, love to see more from you and if you ever need an ear I have two...^_^

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Scars

    everything come and go leaving behind traces, some that can never disappear ... ahh yes... how cruel the past was... this was a nice read keep it up

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