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    Scary Paranoia

    A dark Hallow's eve, in a moonlit dreary
    leaves and twig fragments dance around eerily
    At darkest night hours, I creep through the halls
    something I heard, seemingly nothing at all

    I resume to my work as I ignore my suspicion
    yet I hear the sound again throughout my dark kitchen
    I rush to the center of the room to find
    something queer to my surprise

    A piece of black paper rolled up like a scroll
    what I saw inside was a tale to be told
    Once upon a time, the paper first read
    but this was all that the paper had said

    I ponder and ponder and come to halt
    another noise that I heard, I feel I'm being stalked
    I dash from room to room, with a confused look of dread
    a scary paranoia has befallen my head

    I find a seat at my nearest convenience
    this whole situation is nothing short of inconvenient
    I hear noise again, but the echo draws closer
    it's gets closer, closer, and closer

    I jump from my seat with a thick heavy sweat
    and I've soon to realize something yet
    The scroll that I found, what I thought was a prank
    but I'm telling the story, I'm filling in the blanks

    I do what I can to escape this wretched sound
    but I cannot elude, it begins to surround
    I cover my ears with all of my might
    I'm scared, too frightened, too coward to fight

    My window breaks open from a strong, mighty gale
    knocks me off my feet but soon it curtails
    I regain my composure and run to the door
    it's locked, there's seems no hope anymore

    I sprint to my stairs and I find the black paper
    still the same sentence, who or what is this caper?
    The noise, now a voice, says to look to my wall
    I turn around swiftly to find a women in thrall

    I cried, she was dead, sripped naked to the bone
    screaming with fear, I reach for my phone
    my fear and trembling made it hard to call
    help, please any help at all

    The voice with a grim and goulish long laugh
    feeling the sense of death, and hearing a thunderous clash
    Feeling reminiscent of Edgar Allen Poe
    with the wind whipping violently through my window

    I cry, cry with a blood curdling howl
    I have no more options, what can I do now?
    I clench the black paper that started this night
    with no hope of survival in future's sight

    I tell death to take me, my time has certainly come
    the voice says "wait, I'm not yet done"
    The voice stops all the comotion and fear
    a whispers a message into my ear

    "Take what happened this very night
    and turn it into a tale of fright.
    You felt the fear and witnessed true terror
    it'll make the story that much better"

    I paused for a second with a perplexing expression
    but also feeling a relieving sensation
    I ask the voice " But why, why choose me?"
    He responded with "Because this is your story."


    Happy Halloween everyone. And let it be...a happy Halloween.
    Last edited by Artistic Anarchy; Oct 27, 2009 at 01:48 PM.

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    Re: Scary Paranoia

    Wow this is really good! You should read and edit, but minus the few errors it's perfect! I loved it! Even though it's scary lol. I'm home alone and it's thundering outside.

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    Re: Scary Paranoia

    Lol.. the description was flawless.. I felt like I was in it running around the house paranoid over noises that is a bit umm.. disturbing.. o.o If only I been reading it in a dark house alone.. it would have been much much better to make it feel more real.. probably "he" would even visit me huh? xD

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