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![]() | Scary Paranoia A dark Hallow's eve, in a moonlit dreary leaves and twig fragments dance around eerily At darkest night hours, I creep through the halls something I heard, seemingly nothing at all I resume to my work as I ignore my suspicion yet I hear the sound again throughout my dark kitchen I rush to the center of the room to find something queer to my surprise A piece of black paper rolled up like a scroll what I saw inside was a tale to be told Once upon a time, the paper first read but this was all that the paper had said I ponder and ponder and come to halt another noise that I heard, I feel I'm being stalked I dash from room to room, with a confused look of dread a scary paranoia has befallen my head I find a seat at my nearest convenience this whole situation is nothing short of inconvenient I hear noise again, but the echo draws closer it's gets closer, closer, and closer I jump from my seat with a thick heavy sweat and I've soon to realize something yet The scroll that I found, what I thought was a prank but I'm telling the story, I'm filling in the blanks I do what I can to escape this wretched sound but I cannot elude, it begins to surround I cover my ears with all of my might I'm scared, too frightened, too coward to fight My window breaks open from a strong, mighty gale knocks me off my feet but soon it curtails I regain my composure and run to the door it's locked, there's seems no hope anymore I sprint to my stairs and I find the black paper still the same sentence, who or what is this caper? The noise, now a voice, says to look to my wall I turn around swiftly to find a women in thrall I cried, she was dead, sripped naked to the bone screaming with fear, I reach for my phone my fear and trembling made it hard to call help, please any help at all The voice with a grim and goulish long laugh feeling the sense of death, and hearing a thunderous clash Feeling reminiscent of Edgar Allen Poe with the wind whipping violently through my window I cry, cry with a blood curdling howl I have no more options, what can I do now? I clench the black paper that started this night with no hope of survival in future's sight I tell death to take me, my time has certainly come the voice says "wait, I'm not yet done" The voice stops all the comotion and fear a whispers a message into my ear "Take what happened this very night and turn it into a tale of fright. You felt the fear and witnessed true terror it'll make the story that much better" I paused for a second with a perplexing expression but also feeling a relieving sensation I ask the voice " But why, why choose me?" He responded with "Because this is your story." Happy Halloween everyone. And let it be...a happy Halloween.
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![]() ![]() | Re: Scary Paranoia Wow this is really good! You should read and edit, but minus the few errors it's perfect! I loved it! Even though it's scary lol. I'm home alone and it's thundering outside.
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![]() ![]() | Re: Scary Paranoia Lol.. the description was flawless.. I felt like I was in it running around the house paranoid over noises that is a bit umm.. disturbing.. o.o If only I been reading it in a dark house alone.. it would have been much much better to make it feel more real.. probably "he" would even visit me huh? xD |
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