wrote this when i was in my english period, i was kind of sleepy
so i really don't know if this came together
anyways tell me what you think
i even don't if this is a story or a poem
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the first of my life startes wheni was born
when i was born, i was born not knowing what to expect from life
i continued to live on
when i reached six
my parents took me to school
i started to learn and understand
i understood some things about life
but when i entered high school
teachers started to teach me calculus, chemistry and physics
i made my through this hell
but why do i feel like this is too much to withstand
i can't take this no more...........
nooooooooooooooooooooooo.......................... ..........
something's got to give
teachers got to give
i wil run no more
i will fight against this no more
i will pass this hell
now i will make everyone realize school is hell
Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
I Fly Swiftly through the air
I Spread My Wings Without A trace
very interesting. i like the flow of it from birth to highschool ^.^ descriptive yet vauge enough to make you think about it.
on a more personal note:
i hope you did fight and survive the "hell" as you describe it. everyone needs a highschool education but a lot never finish. but college is just as bad as highschool, just a little more freedom that is countered with harder classes.
lol the poem was great, i once wrote a poem with the same tittle.
lol enjoy while you are in high school, once you go to college things will get a lil difficult.
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