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![]() Otaku Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Inside my mind
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![]() Credits: 4,354 | Scraps Me (A few weeks ago) Unbalanced. Desperate Worry, struggle, escape Fear and hope battle Alone Me (Now-a-days) Stronger. Hungry Focusing, changing, readying I won't waiver anymore Determined I was playing around with a couple different types of poems. None of them are meant to be very long, so I thought I would just lump them in one thread to save space. Life By Zawa Life is a pulse Indefinite with every beat Flourishing and faltering at every crossroad Enjoy and endure until the end, when the beat stops I altered a name poem, and used the word L-I-F-E to start each line of the poem instead of someone’s name. This was the poem I wrote to enter into the battle with Holderofthedark, but opted to go with the other for an "other worldly" reason. Well tell me what you think of my scraps. ^__^
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![]() 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,502 | Re: Scraps Lol scraps ^^ they are short and the descriptive words tell alot.. very simple yet informative...though the info's are incomplete.. eeh.. you can't tell everything now right? keep it up ^^ try more new styles ![]() |
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![]() Slippery When Wet~ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that!
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![]() Credits: 157,450 | Re: Scraps Great job! I dont see you round here to offtern but then again i'm not here very often eiher! Great work though! cant wait to see more! keep it up!
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![]() Otaku Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Inside my mind
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![]() Credits: 4,354 | Re: Scraps Thanks, I was only playing around with something and bam. This is what I came up with. I'm not sure what you mean by the information being incomplete though? ?_?
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![]() Credits: 49,619 | Re: Scraps Hmmm... your "scraps" are better than some of my quite serious poems *giggles* but I must say the one you entered in the battle was better than this one... And the "Enjoy" one was better too (yea... I know it's totaly different )But these were interesting and I enjoyed reading them and hoping to see more as always ![]() |
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![]() ~always by your side~ Join Date: May 2007 Location: small little hick town
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![]() Credits: 10,856 | Re: Scraps Nice cinquain poem. I think you did a good job on them. It's a fun style to do. Keep up the good work.
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