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    Scraps

    Me (A few weeks ago)
    Unbalanced. Desperate
    Worry, struggle, escape
    Fear and hope battle
    Alone

    Me (Now-a-days)
    Stronger. Hungry
    Focusing, changing, readying
    I won't waiver anymore
    Determined

    I was playing around with a couple different types of poems. None of them are meant to be very long, so I thought I would just lump them in one thread to save space.

    Life
    By
    Zawa

    Life is a pulse
    Indefinite with every beat
    Flourishing and faltering at every crossroad
    Enjoy and endure until the end, when the beat stops


    I altered a name poem, and used the word L-I-F-E to start each line of the poem instead of someone’s name. This was the poem I wrote to enter into the battle with Holderofthedark, but opted to go with the other for an "other worldly" reason.

    Well tell me what you think of my scraps. ^__^
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    Re: Scraps

    Lol scraps ^^

    they are short and the descriptive words tell alot.. very simple yet informative...though the info's are incomplete.. eeh.. you can't tell everything now right? keep it up ^^ try more new styles

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    Re: Scraps

    Great job! I dont see you round here to offtern but then again i'm not here very often eiher! Great work though! cant wait to see more! keep it up!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Scraps

    Thanks, I was only playing around with something and bam. This is what I came up with.

    I'm not sure what you mean by the information being incomplete though? ?_?
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    Re: Scraps

    A choppy but unique poem indeed! Not bad...I enjoy reading it. Keep it up! [;

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    Re: Scraps

    Hmmm... your "scraps" are better than some of my quite serious poems *giggles* but I must say the one you entered in the battle was better than this one... And the "Enjoy" one was better too (yea... I know it's totaly different )

    But these were interesting and I enjoyed reading them and hoping to see more as always

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    Re: Scraps

    Nice cinquain poem. I think you did a good job on them. It's a fun style to do. Keep up the good work.

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