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    Screw It

    I'm not gonna give Death another soul,
    You're not gonna get mine,
    Seducing me with a promise,
    A promise of eternal peace and rest.

    Yet I hear the voices of those near me,
    Pulling my soul away from the dark shroud,
    Towards once more to the sunlight,
    To feel the warmth of the sun,
    And the warmth of a loved one.

    I open my eyes to a world,
    The one i open and live in,
    No rest for wicked yet,
    I still got a life to live,
    Sorry Grim you're gonna have to come back another day.

    I'm here to stay and keep living,
    Kepp helping my friends,
    Keep loving the one close to me,
    Keep walking on till my time is truly up.
    See you on the flip side, Grim.

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    Re: Screw It

    very cool poem it shows alot of hope and i like this one'
    becasue it show people can defeat the inner demon no matter the obstical
    and that is what life truly is about, awesome jason i like this alot better
    than the other poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Screw It

    your poetry reminds me of N.Y. Soulja's. Everything was going so well until this stanza.

    The second verse seems like it's in the wrong place or context.

    I open my eyes to a world,
    The one i open and live in,
    No rest for wicked yet,
    I still got a life to live,
    Sorry Grim you're gonna have to come back another day.
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    Re: Screw It

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    your poetry reminds me of N.Y. Soulja's. Everything was going so well until this stanza.

    The second verse seems like it's in the wrong place or context.

    I open my eyes to a world,
    The one i open and live in,
    No rest for wicked yet,
    I still got a life to live,
    Sorry Grim you're gonna have to come back another day.
    mmm well tell me more...how doesnt this fit?

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Screw It

    koolie poem i love it pm me

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    Re: Screw It

    I love our poem. The words flowed together just right. Keep it up
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    Re: Screw It

    Very deep words are used that made the poem more cooler...

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