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  1. Jun 20, 2006 06:30 AM #1
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    Sea

    The tide recedes,
    But leaves behind
    Bright seashells on the sand
    The sun goes down,
    But gentle warmth
    Still lingers on the land
    The music stops,
    But yet it echoes on
    In sweet, sweet refrains
    For every joy that passes,
    Something beautiful remains
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    one of my first poems that wasnt homework for school; hope you like it!
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    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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  2. Jun 20, 2006 06:49 AM #2
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    Re: Sea

    that was absolutely beautiful i give it two thumbs up

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  3. Jun 20, 2006 06:51 AM #3
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    Re: Sea

    thank alot! i just wrote it yesterday.
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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  4. Jun 20, 2006 07:16 AM #4
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    Re: Sea

    good for you'll be writing poems in books in no time flat

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  5. Jun 20, 2006 08:56 AM #5
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    Re: Sea

    i just wrote it for fun- i'm not even sure if i'll write any more
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    Re: Sea

    it be very nice if u did not to force u or anything like that

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  7. Jun 20, 2006 09:33 AM #7
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    Re: Sea

    it was good beter then mine but not into happy stuff still beter then mine
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    Re: Sea

    i no ur not into happy stuff- ur into depressing stuff that makes me cry
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