It was four o'clock when I wiped
the dreams from my eyes.
I saw the sun but couldn't feel its
The day slowly walked throught the door,
though I wasn't really sure that I could help that anymore
even though I locked the doors.
It wasn't long before I heard the
water rise upon the shore out the window
past the dock.
The birds they flew away, despite
everything I knew.
I walked out my door not bothering to lock
it this time.
nice poem and mabye you feel like the bird when we put it in seagulls but it 's
nice ...keep up...easy to read....:2thumbs:
Thank you very much, it was really just a quick poem I wrote one day, I do have many others though. ^-^
i liked this poem simple and to the point and i
like how you just up and leave the house not
thinking of where your going thats really cool because
a life thats planned sometimes isnt a really exciting life
There aren't that many people who understand my poems, or the meaning behind them. I am glad I finally found people who do ^-^ I'll be posting more poems as well.