nice poem and mabye you feel like the bird when we put it in seagulls but it 's
nice ...keep up...easy to read....![]()
It was four o'clock when I wiped
the dreams from my eyes.
I saw the sun but couldn't feel its
warming light.
The day slowly walked throught the door,
though I wasn't really sure that I could help that anymore
even though I locked the doors.
It wasn't long before I heard the
water rise upon the shore out the window
past the dock.
The birds they flew away, despite
everything I knew.
I walked out my door not bothering to lock
it this time.
Dear Dinah...
nice poem and mabye you feel like the bird when we put it in seagulls but it 's
nice ...keep up...easy to read....![]()
Foolish beating
Thank you very much, it was really just a quick poem I wrote one day, I do have many others though. ^-^
Dear Dinah...
i liked this poem simple and to the point and i
like how you just up and leave the house not
thinking of where your going thats really cool because
a life thats planned sometimes isnt a really exciting life
for most.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Thank you.
There aren't that many people who understand my poems, or the meaning behind them. I am glad I finally found people who do ^-^ I'll be posting more poems as well.
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