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    Seagulls

    It was four o'clock when I wiped
    the dreams from my eyes.

    I saw the sun but couldn't feel its
    warming light.

    The day slowly walked throught the door,
    though I wasn't really sure that I could help that anymore
    even though I locked the doors.

    It wasn't long before I heard the
    water rise upon the shore out the window
    past the dock.

    The birds they flew away, despite
    everything I knew.

    I walked out my door not bothering to lock
    it this time.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Seagulls

    nice poem and mabye you feel like the bird when we put it in seagulls but it 's
    nice ...keep up...easy to read....

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Seagulls

    Thank you very much, it was really just a quick poem I wrote one day, I do have many others though. ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Seagulls

    i liked this poem simple and to the point and i
    like how you just up and leave the house not
    thinking of where your going thats really cool because
    a life thats planned sometimes isnt a really exciting life
    for most.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Seagulls

    Thank you.
    There aren't that many people who understand my poems, or the meaning behind them. I am glad I finally found people who do ^-^ I'll be posting more poems as well.

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