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    byakugan Barn Break Champion, Dino Rennen Champion, Block Buster Champion, Portal Champion, Quick Brick Champion cantsenditback is off to a good start cantsenditback's Avatar
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    searching

    How do all life begins
    What do deaths holds
    Why do we all travel
    To search whats in our souls
    Clues to who we are
    Are what we hope to find
    Always searching for somthing
    Searchin' for a sign
    to know who we are
    to search what we need
    to find what we lost
    to the poor we must feed
    to love the one you love
    first you need to be loved

    first try so i dont mind if the comment is bad or not

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    Re: searching

    Naw it wasn't bad. The gramatical errors in the begining... But nothing that couldn't be overlooked. I would sudgest to continue writing.
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