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    Seasons of the Heart


    Seasons of the Heart

    In the winter
    like a sakura
    the feelings lie dormant.

    Spring comes
    and like the budds
    the feelings blossom.

    In the summer
    like a sakura
    the feeling at their peek.

    Fall comes
    and like the leaves
    the feelings fade.

    Then in winter
    like a sakura
    the feelings lie dormant.


    Well I hope you like it(^.^)

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
    ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~

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    Re: Seasons of the Heart

    Ahh well it's nice and mentions all the seasons ^_^ Interesting
    But instead of saying like a sakura you could've said like sakura... i dont know ^^;

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    Re: Seasons of the Heart

    This was really beautiful. I like the use of the seasons and how you gave aspects to all of them. You are very creative. Keep up the good work.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Seasons of the Heart

    Very nice poem, princess.

    I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the great work!

    I look forward to reading more.

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    Re: Seasons of the Heart

    very good work, short but still the best to come with all seasons in one poem, hope to read more.

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    Re: Seasons of the Heart

    nice poem for describing the seasons and I hope to see more of your work in the future here on AO. Keep up the good work P.R.

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    Re: Seasons of the Heart

    tHANKS FOR THE FEED BACK . i'M GLAD YOU ALL ENJOYED IT. i WAS'NT SO SURE WHEN i FIRST WROTE IT. tHANKS A BUNCH.(^.^)

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
    ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~

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