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    Second Chance

    A once in a life time chance.

    Away with it I dance.

    I ask you to give me one more chance.

    But you simply look at me and turn.

    I've never felt such a feeling, like a burn.

    A burn that makes me yurn.

    For more you one more time.

    Even if I pay for a billion dimes.

    Just once more.

    I didn't mean to call you a whore.

    Just...please an encore.

    A second chance will mean more than its worth.

    So once more...another waltz?

    A waltz that won't bring my life to a halt.

    Für Du bist mein Supernova und mein Liebe.

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    Re: Second Chance

    very cool poem i like the discription of yuo wanting her to take you back
    and the desperation seems so real i like this alot/ very awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Second Chance

    I like the poem. It seems alive. Your passion in the subject shows.

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