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    Secret Love

    Why does it hurt the way I feel for you
    To know that you'll never be mine
    To have or hold during lonely nights
    I watch as you walk away to another
    How I wish it was me

    But never that.....

    You could never like or love one as me
    I sit and cry these tears of sorrow
    Why can't I find another?
    When will the pain end?
    Why does it hurt so bad?

    I look to escape the pain of heartache
    The only way I know how
    By using the pain of a blade

    Look at what I do for you
    I save you from knowing my existance
    My love should always be kept a secret
    Never should I waste your time

    I am a burden to all
    A non-existant
    Don't think of me
    I am not of your worth

    "You dont need me"
    "You deserve better"
    The words my mind scream

    I want to be happy
    But I need you with me
    The pain needs to stop
    Please make the pain go away

    As long as your around the pain subsides
    But I will never be known
    To have the love of a lifetime is a feeling I will never know

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    Re: Secret Love

    AWWW BEATIFUL I REALLY LOVE THE PART ABOUT
    "look to escape the pain of heartache
    The only way I know how
    By using the pain of a blade"

    GREAT POEM YA SHOULDA USED A DIFF COLOUR THO
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    Re: Secret Love

    Almost sounds like a song. And the subject? It's been written about soo many times! You have to make it seem as if you're the only one writing about it. And this poem? Does not make it seem so.
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