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    Sedoka #3 (Mental War And Recovery)

    In mind I stil fight.
    Bullets, mortars, we hear them.
    It is hard to sleep at night.
    But we can endure.
    The sun, sea waves over rocks
    What I need is at this shore.

    This is my third Sedoka, the first covered similiar subject matter there is something about the sedoka that lends itself to warrior nature.

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    Re: Sedoka #3 (Mental War And Recovery)

    AWAAAA >< this words really reached my heart really ... the words :
    " In mind I stil fight.
    Bullets, mortars, we hear them"
    that is very true , very real , very deep for me ... =^_^=
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